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Re: Finding myself.
Wow. I did not know I could speak so well. O.o; Though I have a feeling a lot of the stuff on YWS from the more serious people is 'trash' ...
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: Finding myself.
I sat there on the edge of my bed (bad form, this is narrative) Pondering to myself...I felt like I were dead. (Doesn't flow) There I sat. Sat. (Doesn't work) ...
Apr 15, 2008 -
Re: An Ode to Me
Wow...this is just as bad as the 'i love me rooms' of many English houses and other forms of being downright pompous in the worse of ways. Though it was ...
Apr 15, 2008 -
Re: Blank - Chapter 7
Author's Note: Seventh post for the seventh day of writing. A pause in Serena's story for a return to the current time and setting. If you liked chapters 4-6 and ...
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: Blank - Chapter 6
Author's note: Since this has continued on to chapter six, for those of you just picking it up, or just trying to remember the foreign words, I've provided a little ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: Blank - Chapter 5
Thank you for the review! Brother Povek makes his return after the congregation, he was not swiftly dealt with because of the rush to call the people from their work ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: Blank - Chapter 5
Author's Note: Thank you for reading, please enjoy it. ================= Chapter Five – First of Four Tales, Part II - Preparations The bells of the church began to ring out, ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: Blank - Chapter 4
Author's Note: If you read chapters 1-3 then you are doing just fine, if you didn't you aren't missing much. This is one of Sage Serena's stories, told in third ...
Apr 8, 2008 -
Re: Blank - Chapter 3
Author's note: I went back and added to this one, changed some bit and made it a tiny bit longer. Also clearing up one mystery entirely. After the seriousness of ...
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Site Down For 12 Hours April 6, 2008
20 or so steps? Any chances you are running an Apache server based off your own computer?
Apr 6, 2008 -
Re: Blank - Chapter 1
You meant this to be in response to Chapter 2... As for the full moon, aside from the fact it is going to be light enough for her to make ...
Apr 6, 2008 -
Re: Blank - Chapter 2
Author's note: This time we take a look into two of Sage Sevil's memories. A short chapter, but nevertheless a flashback to his shock and resolve that he must build ...
Apr 6, 2008 -
Re: I hate your love
Why can't you just, open your mind and see? See with those glazed eyes, that you're suffocating me? (rhyming with see. Fine for now.) I wish you would, because you're ...
Apr 6, 2008 -
Re: going home
a love lost, a love stolen, (split into two lines) and the cost; a heart broken. (split into two lines) a sliver of metal, his only way, (split into two ...
Apr 6, 2008 -
Re: The Broken Package
I gave him the package With no despair I told him not to break it Not even a tare (while tare is a word, I think you mean tear) Inside ...
Apr 6, 2008
